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I am writing a research paper on the career I hope to have when I am older. This is what I have so far, the minimum requirements for this paper is to have 3 pages worth (2 1/2 right now) and to correctly cite everything MLA style. thank you, please just give me a grade on this paper so far and leave a few comments (this is for honors english at a freshman grade, the grading scale is 93-100 is an A, so please grade me according to that scale thank you!!!!! here it is!!!-

“Ask not what your country can do for you, but ask what you can do for your country,” as the late 35th President of the United States, John F. Kennedy, once said, is a great way to describe my duty for my country. By the time that I have live on this earth for 30 years, at least 9 of them in the United States, I hope to be on my way to the U.S. Senate in Washington D.C. to represent my native state. I found many resources that will guide me on my long, exasperating journey to my own seat in the grand Congress. Although a tough, painstaking, and demanding career, my hopes are set, and my goal is to become a qualified senator for our great nation, the United States of America.
Although it is literally unnecessary to have any education whatsoever to become any sort of politician in the United States of America, it’s never a bad thing to learn about political science, economics, or history for my career choice. In my research I have found that the most important courses to major to help me become a senator, are also my favorite. Never has a class ever moved me as much as history, nor has a class ever interested me as much as economics. To become a politician of any sort it is always recommended to take these courses, as well as government and business classes as a high school senior (Cruising online). In my case I plan on taking my high school degree and taking it a few steps further. I plan to get at least a Bachelor’s degree, and then go for a Master’s degree after that in the field of economics. In these times especially, economics is definitely a “hot topic”, and will almost reassure me a safe position during my future campaigns. When I have to choose what colleges to apply to, I will definitely be putting my hopes on Northwestern University up in Evanston, not only do they have a great economics department (Northwestern online), but it is also found in the great state I plan to represent, and as I’m always analyzing information, living your life in the area you will be representing is never a bad idea.
In addition to having a good education, to be a politician it’s great to have “people skills” and other certain qualities (Cruising online). Many presidents in the past, and our next president, have definitely had great “people skills”. According to Dr. Schoenberg, the “Presidential Expert”, John F. Kennedy, used his charismatic smile, and friendly tones to help him get elected (Schoenberg online). You may not know me personally, but I can almost guarantee you that in a few years you will know very much about me, and my opinions when you’re flipping through channels and stumble upon me, on C-Span. All jokes aside, I am known by my friends to be a very smart and intellectual person, as well as a kind human being with the hope of helping out in a distraught time. In addition to having “people skills”, it is great to use history and past experience to help you make important choices that could impact the future(Cruising online). For example, back in 1941, America was shocked by the attacks on Pearl Harbor, and President Roosevelt had a big decision to make, and although he knew of the consequences, he believed that war was imminent.

I am writing a research paper on the career I hope to have when I am older. This is what I have so far, the minimum requirements for this paper is to have 3 pages worth and to correctly cite everything MLA style. thank you, please just give me a grade on this paper so far and leave a few comments (this is for honors english at a freshman grade, the grading scale is 93-100 is an A, so please grade me according to that scale thank you!!!!! here it is!!!-

Here it is completed ( i couldnt find any site that was able to handle that amount of wording lol so heres the link)-

http://www.gamefaqs.com/boards/genmessage.php?board=216&topic=46598575

Please read it and grade me on Yahoo! Answers Please!! Thanks a lot everyone. And to that guy who gave me a C, DUDE THAT WAS A ROUGH DRAFT I SAID I WAS NOT DONE YET.

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